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AVOID CLICHÉS

A cliché is an expression that has been overused. As a result, it sounds stale and dull. In fact, as soon as you begin to hear or read a cliché, you can predict how it will end.

Read the following sentences and try to figure out how the clichés in them will end:

She baked a cake that was as light as a ______.

Jason's remark was right on ______.

Janice, you have hit the nail_____ ____ _____.

After being crushed, the can lay flat as a __________.

Watch for clichés as you rewrite the drafts of your papers. Make one last check for clichés as you edit your final draft. Trust your instincts to come up with alternatives that are clearer, more appealing, less wordy, and often more specific than clichés are.

A LIST OF CLICHÉS

acid test
as good as done
as the crow flies
at all costs
better half
bit the dust
breaking my neck
broken record
clear as mud
cold, hard facts
cool as a cucumber
dark horse
dead as a doornail
drunk as a skunk
early bird
easy for you to say
edge of the seat
face the music
fall on deaf ears
fly like an eagle
foaming at the mouth
going places
green with envy
grinning from ear to ear
healthy as a horse
hit the deck

hit the sack
hot potato
keep your shirt on
ladder of success
like the plague
little lady
old hat
on your own
paid your dues
passed away
picture perfect
pure as snow
rest assured
rite of passage
sacred cow
short and sweet
sick as a dog
sink or swim
stone cold sober
stone's throw
strong as an ox
tighten our belts
to the point
turn for the worse
white as a ghost

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CREATE AN APPROPRIATE TONE

Tone is the style in which you express yourself. Your tone may vary depending upon purpose and audience. For example, if you are writing a letter to a friend, you might use an informal tone and include slang, jargon, colloquialisms, and contractions. If you are writing a college essay, on the other hand, you will want to use a formal tone.

To maintain a formal tone, avoid slang, jargon, and colloquialisms. Also, choose language carefully and include only idiomatic expressions.

AVOIDING SLANG

Slang is language that has a private and often short-lived meaning. Slang can be very powerful, but it is often inexact and is usually understood by only a select group.

For example, teenagers often use words that their parents have never heard of and that are not found in contemporary newspapers, textbooks, and the like.

Slang:

When the dude split, he left the chick with a kid and no bread.

Formal:

When the man left, he abandoned the woman with a child and no money.

AVOIDING JARGON EXCEPT WITH SPECIAL AUDIENCES

Jargon is language used by experts in a particular field. It includes technical words, new compounds, and familiar words used in a unique way. Jargon is appropriate as long as your readers are familiar with the field from which it comes. But jargon can make your writing complicated and unclear to those who are unfamiliar with such language.

Jargon:

After booting up the computer and activating the printer, Arnie made hard copies of his business correspondence.

Familiar:

After turning on the computer and the printer, Arnie printed his business letters.

AVOIDING COLLOQUIALISMS

Colloquial expressions, while not always incorrect, are informal and more appropriate in spoken conversation among friends than in formal writing.

Colloquial:

I found the puppy sleeping back of the couch.

Formal:

I found the puppy sleeping behind the couch.

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