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Interactions Access Writing, 4/e
Pamela Hartmann, Los Angeles Unified School District
James Mentel, Los Angeles Unified School District
Neighborhoods, Cities, and Towns

Editing Practice

Rewrite the paragraph. Look for mistakes in:

  • paragraph form
  • capital letters
  • correct punctuation.



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New york city is my favorite place there are many things to do there. You can look at the stores on fifth avenue You can visit Museums, you can go to concerts. there are also restaurants from every country in the world My favorite restaurant is myoshi. it is a japanese restaurant on the Corner of broadway and cathedral parkway.









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