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Interactions Access Writing, 4/e
Pamela Hartmann, Los Angeles Unified School District
James Mentel, Los Angeles Unified School District

Shopping and e-Commerce

Editing Practice

Rewrite the paragraph. Look for mistakes in:

  • capitalization
  • punctuation
  • spelling
  • verb forms
  • plural and singular nouns



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the wrld is going to be much better in 50 years people not going to be hungry. there aren't going to be any more wars Scentists are going find cures for cancer and AIDS life is also going to be very exciting. Peoples are going to travel to other Planets like mars and neptune