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          My name is Daniel Ortega. I am a student at Kennedy High School. I like sports. I also like music. I have two sisters and one brother. My family lives in Garfield.

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17 years old

eleventh-grade student

Kennedy High School, Westbrook, New York

Garfield 30 miles from New York City

plays football, basketball, soccer and swims

favorite band: U-2

plays piano and trumpet

sisters: Marta  19 student at New York University

             Karla 14 in 8th grade

brother:  Diego 12 in 6th grade

father:  engineer

mother:   teacher



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