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Interactions Access Writing, 4/e
Pamela Hartmann, Los Angeles Unified School District
James Mentel, Los Angeles Unified School District
Friends and Family

Editing Practice

Rewrite the paragraph. Look for mistakes in:

  • capitalization
  • punctuation
  • spelling
  • simple present tense



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My name is joseph walden I am 18 years old. I am a senior at bradley High School. After school, I work at the hawkins library. It fun to work at the library because my girlfriend work there too. her name is Janice. She gos to Brookstone high school, so we no see each other at school. On fridays, janice and I usually go to the Movies, on Saturdays, she help her mother in the house. I stay home and studies. On sundays we often eat together. Janice come to my house. or I go to her house.









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