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Interactions Access Writing, 4/e
Pamela Hartmann, Los Angeles Unified School District
James Mentel, Los Angeles Unified School District
Health Care

Editing Practice

Rewrite the paragraph. Look for mistakes in:

  • capitalization
  • punctuation
  • spelling
  • modals (should/must/have to)
  • singular and plural nouns



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          This Country should makes tobacco illegal. Tobacco very bad for you. It cause many health problem., it is also addictive, so it is dificult to stop. the goverment should to help people, it don't should hurt people. tobacco is only good for tobacco company. It is bad for everyone else. I hope that in the future tobacco will illegal.








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