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Interactions Access Writing, 4/e
Pamela Hartmann, Los Angeles Unified School District
James Mentel, Los Angeles Unified School District
Sleep and Dreams

Editing Practice

Rewrite the paragraph. Look for mistakes in:

  • capitalization
  • punctuation
  • spelling
  • subjects of the sentences
  • past continuous tense
  • simple past tense



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          Last night I have a very strange dream, I was at my granmother's house. She was cook dinner. I helping her. Suddenly, it began to raining. The rain started come into the house. the water very deep. so I started swim I couldn't find my granmother. I swimmed out of the house. It not raining outside. It was sunny. I was seeing my parents. I told them the story. They not upset. Then I see my grandmother. She sits in her garden. She not remember anything about the water. Everyone tell me that it is a dream. I dreamed that I dreaming!








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