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Interactions Access Writing, 4/e
Pamela Hartmann, Los Angeles Unified School District
James Mentel, Los Angeles Unified School District
Great Destinations

Editing Practice

Rewrite the paragraph. Look for mistakes in:

  • capitalization
  • punctuation
  • pronouns
  • verb tenses
  • subjects of sentences
  • adjectives



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My trip to mexico was very nice. We went to the city of Morelia, is a very nice colonial city. Morelia is more than 450 years old. We stayed at a hotel old and lovely in the center of the city. On the first two days, we walk all around the city. We spend a lot of time in the enormous cathedral. It was dark, exciting and peaceful inside. It was also very cool. Outside was very hot and humid. one day we went to the town of patzcuaro. Patzcuaro is even older than Morelia. It is on the shore of a small lake. We took a boat to visit Janitzio. A small island in the lake. We only stayed in Mexico one week but it was a very nice time.








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