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Interactions 1 Writing, 4/e
Cheryl Pavlik
Margaret Keenan Segal
Experiencing Nature

Editing Practice

Edit and rewrite the following paragraph. Pay particular attention to:

  • using adjectives and prepositional phrases
  • using pronouns
  • using a, an, and the
  • present continuous tense



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I looking out of the window. It snows outside. Many children are play in the snow. Some boys are building the snowman. The snowman isn't very big. There is an black hat on his head. It is smiling. Some other children are sliding down a hill. A hill isn't very big. They are happies.








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