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Interactions 1 Writing, 4/e
Cheryl Pavlik
Margaret Keenan Segal
Health

Editing Practice

Edit and rewrite the following paragraph. Pay particular attention to:

  • restrictive relative clauses
  • transitional words and phrases in addition, for example, however
  • showing purpose and giving reasons with to



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I don't like to take medicine that the doctor gives them to me. I think people can cure themselves for example my aunt had a bad problem with her stomach. The doctor told her she needed some medicine for get better. So, my aunt did not agree. She started eating a lot of fruits and vegetables. In addition a lot of water. After three month she was fine.








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