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Cheryl Pavlik
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Editing Practice

Edit and rewrite the following paragraph. Pay particular attention to:

  • present perfect
  • simple, present, simple past, present and past continuous, and future
  • in fact
  • stating results with so that



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Junko says that since she came to the United States she's has been so busy that she not have time to feel homesick. She take many classes and she also has been work at the library on the weekends. Junko is an artist. She spend a lot of time in the art studio in fact sometimes she even sleep there. She is going go home for vacation next month. She is so happy that can't wait. "My mother will cooking for me and I willn't have classes to go," she says.