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Instructions: Revise each of the sentences below in three or four ways. Use principles you have learned to make changes; for example, change voice (active or passive), turn nominals into verbs or verbs into nominals, change the point of view, and add or eliminate redundancy. You may even add words to improve the tone (such as words of appreciation or apology) or turn one sentence into two sentences.
As you work through these sentences, analyze the changes you are making. Be creative; your goal is variety, not clarity.

1			An incorrect invoice was accidentally sent to you last week by our accounting department.
2			Your position for a sales representative is of interest to me.
3			George was not in attendance at the meeting.
4			An omission was inadvertently made in your order, and the items in question are being sent to you immediately.