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Instructions: In the sentences below, use connectors to bridge ideas. Develop two or three different versions for each set.

1			We will review the feedback. We will not immediately suggest changes.
2			Our company has changed its mission. Our brochures need to be updated.
3			The conference was canceled. Several members protested.

Instructions: Revise (or rewrite) the paragraph below by adding transitions and adjusting the information flow; you may change words as well as add or delete information.

4			The shipment of designer jeans had not arrived at our Pittsburgh outlet. Several customers called to complain that the jeans were not in stock. Anational sales campaign had promoted the brand intensely. Sales were negatively affected. Customer relations were jeopardized. Customers could not purchase the jeans. The jeans were not in stock. TV and newspaper ads ran a promotional price. The ads promised an abundant supply of jeans were in stock.