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Revising and Editing

Edit and rewrite the following paragraph. Look for problems in the following:

  • count and noncount nouns
  • such as
  • appositives

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      I don't like to cook, but I love to make pie. I make many different kinds of pies. Such as pumpkin pie, apple pie, and cherry pie. Some pie is easy to make. For apple pie, you only need two pound of apple, a few sugar, and some spices. Other pie is harder to make. Pecan is a pie that has nuts instead of fruit. It is much work. It takes a long time to make a good pecan pie.







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